Do you know why some people say school is a big family??
It is because teachers look like our fathers and mothers.
And the students seem our brothers or sisters.
They teach us more and more, like homework or knowledges.
When we have some problems, they will help us to solve the problems.
For example, if the students become bad, they will always destroy public things or don't listen people's advice.
But teachers do not abandon and change student's wrong.
Therefore, I think our school is a big household.
Lai Ka Yu, Irene
natalielee

You have write a good article.
But,
This sentence can change to two sentences.
It is better.
(But teachers do not abandon and change student's wrong.)
The teachers do not abandon the students.
They will change student's wrong.